Nixil
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Into Winter
I wrote this in one and a half hours today, before my brain melted, so it is currently unedited.
It also doesn't have any plot planned currently and is very short.
There are some questions I would like to ask about it:
Does it seems like there is a plot?
Does it work like an opening of a story?
How is the flow of the text?
What more could I add to the current text and what should I write about next?
What do you think of it currently and also any advice you would give me.
Thank you!
I wrote this in one and a half hours today, before my brain melted, so it is currently unedited.
It also doesn't have any plot planned currently and is very short.
There are some questions I would like to ask about it:
Does it seems like there is a plot?
Does it work like an opening of a story?
How is the flow of the text?
What more could I add to the current text and what should I write about next?
What do you think of it currently and also any advice you would give me.
Thank you!