Dark Romance/Fantasy Review swap

[Tseer]

Looking for like-minded writers, mature content only.

 

[avaseofpeonies]

I just read your first three chapters, and I'm hooked! I like your style, I like all the characters so far, and this seems like exactly the kind of thing I like to read. The only criticism I have so far is that the first half of your prologue is too murky. It becomes clear later, but you may not want to make your readers work that hard to figure out who these people are and what they're doing there. I think you could fix that by throwing in a line of introduction for each character when they speak.

I'm always hesitant about formal swap arrangements, but Salvage might be up your alley, if you're ok with some M/M (the side couple). Totally cool if that's not your thing, I'm going to read your book because so far I like it, and I don't require reciprocation (although if that's not your thing, you might like my little vampire short story.)

 

[Sabrina_Valentine]

Looking for like-minded writers, mature content only.

Hi, I'd be interested in doing a review swap with you. I love dark fantasy and my novel 'My Life as an Ero-Magi Sucks!" is mature content.