I don't know if my first chapter is good or bad

[Numero]

Can you give my novel some of your precious wisdom

Transforming the Word

Zenon's life changed when he came across a fortunate accident that changed his life for better or worse. He obtained an Ancient Magic so unique that it required the combination of two different, yet at the same time suitable entities. Magic and Science...

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[RinDes]

It is more lengthy than what I normally read, but that is NOT a bad thing. Your writing is solid, each sentence well constructed. The first chapter is intriguing enough to keep me around for another, and has a certain quality to it. I can sense efforts behind it, some care poured into your work.

Nicely done.

Kindly, Rin.

 

[Numero]

It is more lengthy than what I normally read, but that is NOT a bad thing. Your writing is solid, each sentence well constructed. The first chapter is intriguing enough to keep me around for another, and has a certain quality to it. I can sense efforts behind it, some care poured into your work.

Nicely done.

Kindly, Rin.

Thank you very much, I needed the boost of confidence