I want to make my niche genre, no system, no help, realistic and dark world. I am having trouble with making the newest chapters because I have to set the foundations for a much larger story in the next few chapters. Instead of worrying about the bigger problem, I would like to request that you guys help me perfect the chapters before, and hopefully I can get inspiration from that.
If you could review my new novel: Legend of Pino, that'd be much appreciated
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LitrpgBird
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official bad quality reviewer here!
try putting indents and a new paragraph every time someone (or something) new speaks. just makes it a bit more readable
try putting indents and a new paragraph every time someone (or something) new speaks. just makes it a bit more readable
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No do not indent paragraphs on SH!
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If there is irregular indentation then yeah, you do need it.
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You should post the link to it.
All you need is paragraph spacing. No indents are needed. Indents look weird on SH