Looking for feedback on my story: Lost In The Multiverse [LitRPG]

[SomePersonOfEarth]

how is everyone doing, I have been writing this story for about two weeks now and am looking for some feedback on my story, if you are interested the story is as follows:

Asher Gentry is your normal 24-year-old, stuck in a dead-end job and desperately looking for a way out. Until one day when Asher wakes up naked and surrounded by a forest and a massive lake, with a message before him "Welcome to the Multiverse".

The story is to follow Asher as he travels around gaining strength and while looking for either a way home or a way to live within the world he has woken up to. I am trying to post three chapters a week for this story, Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday. If you enjoy this piece, please leave a review and a comment about what you enjoyed. I hope you fall in love with "Lost In the Multiverse", I can't wait to see how the story progresses.

If you decide to give the story a read, please let me know what you think!

Lost In The Multiverse - Chapter One: Welcome To The Multiverse | Scribble Hub
Chapter 1: Welcome To the Multiverse - Lost In The Multiverse | Royal Road

 

[Nevafrost]

Well, I also am new.But the plot is quite interesting.

 

[SomePersonOfEarth]

Thank you so much