MouseDestruction
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I just started writing a few days ago Saintess of blood and sacrifice
Any advice welcome but was wondering a few things.
Is writing quality ok? Can you follow conversations? Do I need to describe things more? Am I repeating words or phrases too much?
Also my first sex scene in chapter 3. Is that ok? I didn't break it up too much with thoughts and conversation? Descriptive enough? Repetitive?
Also should I add anything to her status page or descriptions in chapter one? - Don't think I will do a charm stat or a health bar though.
Any advice welcome but was wondering a few things.
Is writing quality ok? Can you follow conversations? Do I need to describe things more? Am I repeating words or phrases too much?
Also my first sex scene in chapter 3. Is that ok? I didn't break it up too much with thoughts and conversation? Descriptive enough? Repetitive?
Also should I add anything to her status page or descriptions in chapter one? - Don't think I will do a charm stat or a health bar though.