ElijahRyne
A Hermit that is NOT that Lazy…
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Hello, I was wondering if my if my newest chapter makes sense. I finished it and posted it, yet, I felt that something was off. Is there anything wrong with it? My instinct tells me yes, but I have re read it 20 or more times and find no problems. What I think is wrong, is character motivation and maybe even pacing. But, it may also be because this chapter lacks the flowery language I like to use, and I am making an issue from a drop of water. Still for some reason my ‘spidysense’ is going crazy. So please if it feels like something is missing or it makes no sense at all. Thank you!
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Link to chapter in question:
Under the Tower! - Chapter 2 – That Damned Eye! | Scribble Hub
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Link to series:
Under the Tower!
What is the pit, what is the calamity? With a pinch of planar warfare, mystery cults, demons, gods and immortals. All this and more in Under the Tower! a story told in parts! Part 1 This part follows Andha Ild, a Fire mage, who gained his power from his family bloodline....
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