I haven't done the entire chapter but I did find minor grammar things here and there.
Not to worry, most writers would prefer the grammar to be left to the editors since it tends to staccato the creative writing.
here's some of the grammar notes so far
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She nodded. For the first time in a long time, she felt that maybe the future wouldn’t be so bad.
(Comma after time, replaced you with she and put in past tense felt to match previous sentences)
Just then, Rose felt a jolt run through her body, like touching an exposed electrical wire.
(I put in a comma after then and shortened the sentence for brevity)
She tingled as the electric shock ran through her body as if searching for something. It didn’t hurt and after a couple of seconds, everything was back to normal.
(shiver is a response to cold or fear, electrical shock feels like tingling, pinching, twinging or near cramps - that's why I replaced shivered with tingled. Comma after seconds, took out comma after the word "and" (unless if the comma is intended as a reading prompt to slightly pause))
Rose frowned, she felt confused.
(comma after frowned, added in "she felt" to complete sentence.)
“What was that? There’s too much weird stuff going on these days.”
(period after the word days.)
“Here we are.”
(period after are.)
Before her, a brick-and-wood house loomed, two stories high with an attic and a balcony.
(Took out giant because the word loomed already implies a large size.)
Henry noticed her surprise and laughed, “Incredible isn’t it? It’s absurd to think nobody bought it. After tidying the house up, it will be wonderful.”
(I put in "the house," to improve the flow to the conversation.)
There's more but I didn't have time since I need to get some stuff done.
Good writing so far, keep it up :)