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I just posted a new novel and I just wanted someone to read through it and to give me feedback if there's any wrong grammar and also feedback about the story.
 
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Iamnotabot said:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/669697/i-was-reincarnated-to-be-the-protector-of-the-demon-kind/
This one ?
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Yeah
I forgot to put the link sorry here it is.
www.scribblehub.com

I was Reincarnated to be the Protector of the DemonKind

Our main character died in a car accident while searching for her missing younger sister. The protagonist was then summoned by the demon god to protect the Demon's kin. However, the protagonist is unaware that her younger sister is one of the heroes he must defeat.
www.scribblehub.com www.scribblehub.com
 
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The title is wrong.

It should be

I was Reincarnated to be the Protector of Demonkind.

Demonkind should be one word to show that it is a specific category, humankind for instance rather than human kind. Also, CAPATILIZE all the important words in the title.

Also... there is no need for a period at the end.
Aso... there is no need for 'the' before demonkind.
 
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Anon2023 said:
The title is wrong.

It should be

I was Reincarnated to be the Protector of Demonkind.

Demonkind should be one word to show that it is a specific category, humankind for instance rather than human kind. Also, CAPATILIZE all the important words in the title.

Also... there is no need for a period at the end.
Aso... there is no need for 'the' before demonkind.
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Thank you I will fix it😊
 
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