Arroww
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Hey everyone! As said in the title, I posted my first story ever and I'm looking for some feedback.
I would greatly appreciate if you could take some time to help me.
Thanks.
I would greatly appreciate if you could take some time to help me.
The Empire of Pale
For centuries, the Empire of Pale thrived under the reign of its Emperor. With their countless legions, the Paleans purged world after world of alien and heretic presence, creating a prospering realm made up of thousands of inhabited planets. But one day, the Empire is thrown into chaos and...
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Thanks.
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