Review for revised work, An overpowered isekai, leaving no challenges for the protag lmao

Kakurenbo

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I recently opened up this account again after a long time, and I decided to revise a novel that I used to work on in the past. You guys can provide me with reviews and feedback, or you can just simply sit back and be one of my readers



- Just a note, this is a story I made as a hobby and experiment, while my main reason for writing this is purely for my hobby, I'm also using this as a chance to learn about interpersonal relationships and the emotions of a human. This is so I can implement it on an AI project I plan on starting sometime in the future. So approach this story with the thought that the MC is already the strongest(probably...) character.
Btw, I study computer science, lol
 
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