Arielathen
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Good afternoon,
As my title suggests, I'm looking for some feedback on the first chapter of my book.
While I hope it's well-received, I understand that there are different strokes for different folks.
That being said, if you have a moment and wouldn't mind reading my first chapter, the link is below. It's about 2500 words.
Thanks!
--- Arielathen
Memora (LitRPG) | Scribble Hub
As my title suggests, I'm looking for some feedback on the first chapter of my book.
While I hope it's well-received, I understand that there are different strokes for different folks.
That being said, if you have a moment and wouldn't mind reading my first chapter, the link is below. It's about 2500 words.
Thanks!
--- Arielathen
Memora (LitRPG) | Scribble Hub