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I've decided to share my story with you, and I would love to hear your thoughts and feedback. I hope you enjoy it, but I'm also open to constructive criticism to make it even better.
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I'm interested in your opinion on the following aspects:
I've decided to share my story with you, and I would love to hear your thoughts and feedback. I hope you enjoy it, but I'm also open to constructive criticism to make it even better.
Story: [Quick Save]
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An ordinary man who is fond of games wakes up after an electric shock and realizes that he is in the body of another person in another world. It turns out that he is in the future, where technology is more advanced. The previous owner of the body got into...
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I'm interested in your opinion on the following aspects:
- Writing Style: How readable is the text? Is there anything that could be improved in the narrative style?
- Flaws and Errors: If you noticed any shortcomings or mistakes, I would appreciate you pointing them out. I'm willing to learn and grow.
- Reasons you might not continue reading: If there are moments where you don't feel like continuing to read, please share them.