Beta_Krogoth
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Hey folks, i've recently completed another edit of my story series Sweet Venom as i've submitted it to a competition. Me and my wife ran through arc one again and added some details, smoothed the writing and removed some of the cringe, it feels much better and i'm looking for feedback on it once again.
As a warning, this is an adult, mature sci-fi series with potentially weird sex scenes in it, featuring hermaphroditic characters and anthro/furry characters too, as well as aliens. The sex scenes are skippable if you're not into it but I'd rather be upfront with this than ambush people with it. Otherwise, its a hybrid of action/thriller/horror/romance and has generally received excellent feedback, i am loving the new edit as the start feels so much stronger but yeah.
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As a warning, this is an adult, mature sci-fi series with potentially weird sex scenes in it, featuring hermaphroditic characters and anthro/furry characters too, as well as aliens. The sex scenes are skippable if you're not into it but I'd rather be upfront with this than ambush people with it. Otherwise, its a hybrid of action/thriller/horror/romance and has generally received excellent feedback, i am loving the new edit as the start feels so much stronger but yeah.
Sweet Venom – Rebroken
Arc 1 & 2 - A small Nomad colony reports that thousands of people missing and no one dares to look into it, Diego Harley decides to investigate and becomes the fascination of dark, dangerous creatures that begin to obsess over him, putting everyone around him in danger as they try to claim...