Verdante
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I’m back shamelessly stealing ideas from Reddit . The title says it, share any 333 word excerpt of your story and I’ll tell you what I think! I’m not a grammar person, so don’t expect that. I will tell you what I think about your character/s, the flow of your scene and other things that do not involve grammar (it might, but that's not my main focus).
Rules:
1. Post one at a time. Wait for someone else to comment before you post another excerpt. If you post two things at once, I will only give feedback on one.
2. One user can only share excerpts three times. This may change depending on how many people share.
3. Feedback may take a long time. I’m currently working on other things so please be patient!
4. My feedback is only my opinion. One reader. Not a professional. You can use it or toss it. Your story, your call.
Rules:
1. Post one at a time. Wait for someone else to comment before you post another excerpt. If you post two things at once, I will only give feedback on one.
2. One user can only share excerpts three times. This may change depending on how many people share.
3. Feedback may take a long time. I’m currently working on other things so please be patient!
4. My feedback is only my opinion. One reader. Not a professional. You can use it or toss it. Your story, your call.
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