YeshuasHeart
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I made a story plot for volume 1. What do you guys think? Is it good or bad? If it isn't, how do I fix it?
Table of Content
Year Two Actticus-September
*Act 1: Dangerous School Grounds*
Chapter 1: A Horrible First Day of School
Introduction=Hanna arrives at her Advisory class late and was marked absent. She was an average seventh year student who was transferred to school from another town. She wants to make new friends, but her bad social skills and shyness prevented her from doing so. Plus, she's being bullied by Penina and her friends.
Chapter 2: Soteria
Inciting Incident=Hanna heard the gunfire and screams echoed on the first floor.
Immediate Reaction=Jonah tried to call her from Hanna's bracelet when the cameras were around her.
Reaction=Hanna refused to immediately answer Jonah's call.
Action=Hanna decides to find a secret place for her to transform into Soteria and call back Jonah.
Consequence=Hanna now has to fight off the terrorists and save the school on her own as Soteria, since her communication with Jonah on her bracelet wasn't working properly.
Chapter 3: Eliminating the Terrorists
Pressure=Soteria clears out the terrorists on the ground, second, then first floors as well as rescue the hostages. All this work increased pressure on Soteria and her body became stressful.
Chapter 4: Reinforcements Incoming
Pinch=Reinforcements arrived after Soteria defeated all the terrorists on the first floor, but she feels fighting the terrorists were worse than fighting enemies a month ago. She questions on whether she wants to continue being a superheroine or not, losing all hope until Jonah finally arrived and helped Soteria saved the school from terrorists.
Push=Soteria and Jonah finally leave the school for the rest of the city of Haritapolis, right after the police and federal agents arrive at the school.
*Act 2: Warzone City-Part 1*
Chapter 5: The Centurion
New World=Soteria and Jonah fought the terrorists while they explore and survive the city as well as find the true culprit behind this terrorism.
Fun & Games=Soteria arrogantly believes she can just take down the Centurion.
Chapter 6: Trapped in the Sewers
Old Contrast=Soteria and Jonah fought with one another. Jonah blames Soteria for allowing her pride that led them trapped in the sewers in the first place.
Build Up=Soteria and Jonah's fighting got worse to the point that Jonah claims Soteria doesn't deserve to be a superheroine, which led to their separation.
Chapter 7: Reunion
Midpoint=Although Soteria found an exit out of the sewers on her own, she also found Jonah captured by the terrorists for food.
Reversal=Soteria and Jonah apologized to one another and became partners in crime again, planning on hunting down Centurion together.
Chapter 8: Searching for Centurion
Consequence=Soteria and Jonah tried to search for Centurion, but couldn't find him anywhere.
Trials=Soteria and Jonah fought the terrorists to find the Centurion everywhere they go and they become tired of finding him until they finally found him.
Chapter 9: Battling Centurion
Dedication=After Soteria and Jonah defeated the Centurion, they found out that he and others like him are second in command of Legion and Legatus is the founder and boss of it. They're determined to find and take down Legatus.
*Act 3: Warzone City-Part 2*
Chapter 10: Halfway There
Calm Before the Storm=Soteria found out Legatus is in the prime minister's residence and she and Jonah check it out there.
Pinch=When they arrived, they found out that they'd been ambushed by Legatus' elite bodyguards and Legatus wasn't even there.
Chapter 11: Power Struggle
Darkest Point=Legatus' elite bodyguards were winning over Soteria and Jonah, weakening them. The heroes must choose to either let the villas win and take over Legatus, or find another way to defeat them.
Power Within=Soteria finally thought of another way to defeat one of the bodyguards.
Chapter 12: Overcomers
Action=Soteria taunts one bodyguard to attack her and dodge towards the fire hydrant in order to defeat that bodyguard.
Coverage=Soteria and Jonah manage to work together to defeat the bodyguards and find out about Legatus' true whereabouts.
Chapter 13: Confronting Legatus
Battle=Soteria and Jonah finally hunted down Legatus and fought him.
Chapter 14: Final Fight
Climax=Soteria and Jonah managed to defeat him, but found out that a hidden entity is the true culprit behind this terrorism, using time travel to prevent the heroes from knowing the hidden entity's identity.
Resolution=Hanna's no longer a loner since Maria wants to be her real friend. Soteria and Jonah continuously fight crime and investigate the hidden entity, since the authorities didn't believe them at all.
Extra: Bowling Night
Glossary
Table of Content
Year Two Actticus-September
*Act 1: Dangerous School Grounds*
Chapter 1: A Horrible First Day of School
Introduction=Hanna arrives at her Advisory class late and was marked absent. She was an average seventh year student who was transferred to school from another town. She wants to make new friends, but her bad social skills and shyness prevented her from doing so. Plus, she's being bullied by Penina and her friends.
Chapter 2: Soteria
Inciting Incident=Hanna heard the gunfire and screams echoed on the first floor.
Immediate Reaction=Jonah tried to call her from Hanna's bracelet when the cameras were around her.
Reaction=Hanna refused to immediately answer Jonah's call.
Action=Hanna decides to find a secret place for her to transform into Soteria and call back Jonah.
Consequence=Hanna now has to fight off the terrorists and save the school on her own as Soteria, since her communication with Jonah on her bracelet wasn't working properly.
Chapter 3: Eliminating the Terrorists
Pressure=Soteria clears out the terrorists on the ground, second, then first floors as well as rescue the hostages. All this work increased pressure on Soteria and her body became stressful.
Chapter 4: Reinforcements Incoming
Pinch=Reinforcements arrived after Soteria defeated all the terrorists on the first floor, but she feels fighting the terrorists were worse than fighting enemies a month ago. She questions on whether she wants to continue being a superheroine or not, losing all hope until Jonah finally arrived and helped Soteria saved the school from terrorists.
Push=Soteria and Jonah finally leave the school for the rest of the city of Haritapolis, right after the police and federal agents arrive at the school.
*Act 2: Warzone City-Part 1*
Chapter 5: The Centurion
New World=Soteria and Jonah fought the terrorists while they explore and survive the city as well as find the true culprit behind this terrorism.
Fun & Games=Soteria arrogantly believes she can just take down the Centurion.
Chapter 6: Trapped in the Sewers
Old Contrast=Soteria and Jonah fought with one another. Jonah blames Soteria for allowing her pride that led them trapped in the sewers in the first place.
Build Up=Soteria and Jonah's fighting got worse to the point that Jonah claims Soteria doesn't deserve to be a superheroine, which led to their separation.
Chapter 7: Reunion
Midpoint=Although Soteria found an exit out of the sewers on her own, she also found Jonah captured by the terrorists for food.
Reversal=Soteria and Jonah apologized to one another and became partners in crime again, planning on hunting down Centurion together.
Chapter 8: Searching for Centurion
Consequence=Soteria and Jonah tried to search for Centurion, but couldn't find him anywhere.
Trials=Soteria and Jonah fought the terrorists to find the Centurion everywhere they go and they become tired of finding him until they finally found him.
Chapter 9: Battling Centurion
Dedication=After Soteria and Jonah defeated the Centurion, they found out that he and others like him are second in command of Legion and Legatus is the founder and boss of it. They're determined to find and take down Legatus.
*Act 3: Warzone City-Part 2*
Chapter 10: Halfway There
Calm Before the Storm=Soteria found out Legatus is in the prime minister's residence and she and Jonah check it out there.
Pinch=When they arrived, they found out that they'd been ambushed by Legatus' elite bodyguards and Legatus wasn't even there.
Chapter 11: Power Struggle
Darkest Point=Legatus' elite bodyguards were winning over Soteria and Jonah, weakening them. The heroes must choose to either let the villas win and take over Legatus, or find another way to defeat them.
Power Within=Soteria finally thought of another way to defeat one of the bodyguards.
Chapter 12: Overcomers
Action=Soteria taunts one bodyguard to attack her and dodge towards the fire hydrant in order to defeat that bodyguard.
Coverage=Soteria and Jonah manage to work together to defeat the bodyguards and find out about Legatus' true whereabouts.
Chapter 13: Confronting Legatus
Battle=Soteria and Jonah finally hunted down Legatus and fought him.
Chapter 14: Final Fight
Climax=Soteria and Jonah managed to defeat him, but found out that a hidden entity is the true culprit behind this terrorism, using time travel to prevent the heroes from knowing the hidden entity's identity.
Resolution=Hanna's no longer a loner since Maria wants to be her real friend. Soteria and Jonah continuously fight crime and investigate the hidden entity, since the authorities didn't believe them at all.
Extra: Bowling Night
Glossary
