Write a story about a man who has no choice but to become a villain.

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I saw someone was trying to disturb balance by suggesting a happy prompt so here's a sad one.

I want you to write this story to be a complete downward spiral. Show us everything in his descent into madness and spare no detail.

Show his inner conflict, his doubt in his worth, and his inability to talk to anyone about the problems he's going through.

Make his friends abandon him, and have all his loved ones fall into misfortune, some of you may even be inclined to NTR him.

Whatever you do make this man a complete wreck with no chance at redemption.
 

Tsuru

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I didnt read it

but saw once a R18 jp novel in r18syosetu

A plot summary, that have MC reincarnate with gifts, but one didnt mention about the demerit of terrible life despite high luck
So its basically noble reincarnation and bunch of cliches heroines, like maid, saint, etc
But always NTRed.
Ex (from chap titles and a fast glimpse) : His noble house was attacked and on fire, run with mother/maid etc.
Then go to church but than later, bandits attack the church.
This kind of very attrocious life.
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Like one of my top2 fav novel of all times once said : "Despair isnt the worse pain. The worse is the hope in the despair being broken that is the worse"
=> someone in darkness wont know about his pain, if he doesnt know about the light.
 
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Darkcrow.

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I saw someone was trying to disturb balance by suggesting a happy prompt so here's a sad one.

I want you to write this story to be a complete downward spiral. Show us everything in his descent into madness and spare no detail.

Show his inner conflict, his doubt in his worth, and his inability to talk to anyone about the problems he's going through.

Make his friends abandon him, and have all his loved ones fall into misfortune, some of you may even be inclined to NTR him.

Whatever you do make this man a complete wreck with no chance at redemption.
Read Prince of thorns.
The MC is a villan, But his circumstances made him like this
 

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Once upon a time, in a little known place far far away, there lived an ugly wretched barbaric warlock.
Well, he wasn't always a warlock (heavens forbid anybody was cursed to be born a warlock) and the word "warlock" was not really how the profession he had was described, but it's not important.
The silly warlock was a pathetic human being who really only wasted space with his continued existence, but he also had problems with self-esteem and also had a bizarre obsession with question marks.
He wasn't always evil, but angry at everything for being born such an awful ugly thing he was, it was inevitable he'd only get worse.

~ Le fin ~
 

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Face as pale as milk, the man looked at the bloodied knife in his hand. His eyes filled with disbelief and sorrow as he looked at the dead body Infront of him with several stab wounds, as the night went on he lamented the choices and decisions that led him to this day. He lamented and lamented his fate, his god and finally this corrupted society.

From the corner of his eyes, a glass shard shone brightly in the grim and stuffy room . He crawled over to the shard before flinching to his reflection, bloodshot eyes, pale face and most importantly of all the grin that was permanently etched to his face.No matter how hard he tried to stop smiling, to grief, his smile just seemed to refuse to disappear.

It was at that moment, he realised he had became a monster. No matter what he did, no matter how much he repented it would always be the truth, he had given up his humanity and became a monster with no redemption.

For the first time in so many years,as tears streamed down his cheeck, he laughed, he laughed and laughed, laughing away the sorrow, the frustration, the despair and betrayal. He laughed till his throat become sore and his voice hoarse, but he just couldn't stop laughing. The liberating feeling, it just felt so..good.....

Standing up with a knife in hand, he knew what he had to do, walking out of the house his lonely figure dissepeared as he ambled down the pavement toward his goal, his destiny...
Face as pale as milk, the man looked at the bloodied knife in his hand. His eyes filled with disbelief and sorrow as he looked at the dead body Infront of him with several stab wounds, as the night went on he lamented the choices and decisions that led him to this day. He lamented and lamented his fate, his god and finally this corrupted society.

From the corner of his eyes, a glass shard shone brightly in the grim and stuffy room . He crawled over to the shard before flinching to his reflection, bloodshot eyes, pale face and most importantly of all the grin that was permanently etched to his face.No matter how hard he tried to stop smiling, to grief, his smile just seemed to refuse to disappear.

It was at that moment, he realised he had became a monster. No matter what he did, no matter how much he repented it would always be the truth, he had given up his humanity and became a monster with no redemption.

For the first time in so many years,as tears streamed down his cheeck, he laughed, he laughed and laughed, laughing away the sorrow, the frustration, the despair and betrayal. He laughed till his throat become sore and his voice hoarse, but he just couldn't stop laughing. The liberating feeling, it just felt so..good.....

Standing up with a knife in hand, he knew what he had to do, walking out of the house his lonely figure dissepeared as he ambled down the pavement toward his goal, his destiny...
Not my speciality, but I tried ;)
 

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They had stolen his cookies for the last time. All those years he had been lenient, had taken beating after beating, let them eat them while he looked at them, had taken their money, their "payment", but not anymore. Today was the last day people would invade his house demanding to acquire his cookies. For today he had made special cookies, cookies not for himself but for others. Today would be the last day anyone would eat! For today he had made his cookies... vegan!

Here, one of the cruelest, most evil, and most vile villain origin stories ever. The origin story of a vegan patissier.
 

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Anon couldn't stomach being stabbed repeatedly in the stomach. He slowly started to go insane from his delusions of thinking that people on the forums were humans. He started to question if he was a human himself. Had he been a question mark all along? The only one that talked to him in this dark time was his beloved anonymous commissioner.

He took a break from forums to be with his giantess with large booba, but even she was a delusion in his head. He came back to get revenge on all of the ones that spoke behind his back while he was away. The NTR jokesters would meet their end by a genderbended exclamation point.

-Fin
 

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I am working on another novel, it's an isekai story where Judas get reincarnated and his soul split into two person.

They try to do the right thing, be better to repent for the sin of betraying Jesus. But they found themselves in the same situation, they have to kill someone very similar to Jesus.

At first, they rejected the role of traitors. But as time went on, they learned that they have to fulfill their role, to be someone hated by all.

Its a tragic and bittersweet story of a man, despite coming to a new world, he cannot escape the role of the Betrayer. To be the one to kill someone beloved by all.

This time without the temptation of wealth.
 

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Already have. To pull his empire back from the edge, and restore it to its former self, he commits alot of murder, starts a war, commits a few war crimes, and essentially starts a totalitarian state.
 

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the death mage that doesnt want a forth time is sort of a vilain. though he has plenty of people surounding him suporting his insanity
 

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I tried posting a happy thread and got no replies but the anti-happy one has so many posts 😭 ya’ll don’t have any happy thoughts do you??? Not that my own story is particularly happy… Maybe we’re all depressed lol
 
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