I wrote a one-off a while ago, with the potential for more story to develop. It's the first ever writing I've shared online, and I was hoping to get some feedback on it. If I get a lot of positive reviews, I'll definitely try continuing the story. There's a poll at the end, and the one-off is fairly short (A little over a thousand words). So just give me feedback from there, or post here! Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Edit; Since it doesn't seem to be in latest updates no matter how much I look, the story is (tentatively) called "The Rise of The Golden Sands". Thanks for reading it, if you do!
Edit; Since it doesn't seem to be in latest updates no matter how much I look, the story is (tentatively) called "The Rise of The Golden Sands". Thanks for reading it, if you do!
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