I read to the end of the latest chapter
2nd Root: Red Hood & the Wolf
It took me a bit to realize, but you definitely have a writing style, I think. That makes it harder for me to critique, as I am unsure what is a stylistic choice and what is requiring improvement. I wouldn't want to mess that up for you. I like seeing writing that stands out a bit from what I'm used to seeing on SH.
Personally, I am not a fan of written-out sound effects. I prefer the sound to be described, but this is just a personal preference.
Sometimes you describe an object before naming it, but it would be much shorter just to say what it is. Like the telescope in Sowing 2.
Reading your style can feel a bit awkward at times, especially when the sentence structure feels passive instead of active. Can mess up the flow, I think.
'Speaking' of sentence structure, I think you do a good job of varying the lengths of your sentences and paragraphs, Well Done.
Keep the starting word of each sentence in mind, and try not to repeat them too much.
I can't help but notice that the character spoken of in the description/synopsis has not shown up yet. While the ones merely mentioned are the ones in focus from the start. (As far as I can tell) I'm just pointing out that it is not reflecting what I was expecting
yet.
Since the story is still warming up It is kinda hard to get a good read of it, So I have to work with what's there and the story description.
From the description and tags, it appears to be a little silly, a little absurd, of course if you are using well-known tales it is kinda necessary to put your own spin on it.
By far the most objectionable thing is the fairy scene in the first prologue. Was not expecting something like that right off the bat.
Other than that, it is hard to get a good grasp of the spirit, which is why it earned the rating it has.
I also noticed you haven't written in a while, I hope you are doing well. If you don't keep writing, how will anybody find your treasure?