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    What do y'all use to write?

    Notepad++
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    Thank you, well Ive been loitering around here for quite a while already, i just don't write...

    Thank you, well Ive been loitering around here for quite a while already, i just don't write much in the forums^^
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    What have been the worst comments or hot takes you have received?

    All comments from the same person: Chapter 1 wtf is this intro bro why am i even reading this? FIX IT Chapter 3 just fix the intro, everything else is good, writing is getting better. (deleted by commenter) Chapter 4 worst plot i have ever seen. worse then novels on webnovel.com
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    Reposting A Chapter To Different Story

    @Succubiome Did reposted chapter appear? Yesterday, I accidentally published a chapter that I wanted to schedule for later and deleted it. Does somebody know if it gets flagged if I repost that chapter in like a few weeks again?
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    Recommendations Looking for novels, manga, anything with a certain premise\plot.

    I can't help but think about Soul Eater, but since it's quite known, you might have already seen it. (I've only watched the Yuri version of Soul Eater (Soul Eater NOT!), so no idea if the original one has romance.) Val X Love Tsugumomo The entire Fate Series Absolute Duo Unbreakable...
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    Coping With Poor Reviews

    Am I the only one who noticed the sneaky insults towards the author? Or is it normal to include them in reviews nowadays?
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    Writing Reference

    How do you refer to a male "child"/"toddler"? Do you say it, he, or they? Google says better to refrain from using pronouns in such cases, which sounds weird to me. Sorry if this question sounds stupid, but as a German, I'm inclined towards "it". For example "person" is a female noun in German...
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    Writing Reference

    Thank you for your fast responses! @LilRora Yes, this was the problem I had since the beginning. Especially this sentence in the video: To avoid this, I just set up the rule for myself to never change the referred subject within a sentence, so 'they' would refer to 'councilors' in this...
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    Writing Reference

    Hello, since I started writing a few months ago, I encountered a problem I never thought existed. I'm talking about the clarity of the references of (relative-) pronouns. For example: '... It was the red-haired girl standing behind the blonde who caught his eye.' Is it clear who the 'who' in...
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    What kind of comments are worth deleting?

    Hmm, I've read your opinions, thanks. Yeah, I won't delete them but show the commenters that I've certainly read and acknowledged their comments. Then you have to start writing shitty stories like me, I guess. ^^
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    What kind of comments are worth deleting?

    I understand if you delete comments that are homophobic or resemble some kind of hate speech. But what about something like "Your story is shit. Instantly dropped."?
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    So as someone with the worst review in this thread, please let me give my opinion on this matter for the first and maybe tha last time. I have clearly misunderstood this whole thing. I found this site (SH) through a referral from novelupdates some months ago, where i spent countless of hours...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Was a hard pill to swallow, needed a few hours to calm myself down ^^ Thank you very much for your time and feedback! I really appreciate it!
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hello, in new here so I'm not sure how this works. Can you please look at this? Being a hero
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    Feedback request for my very first story

    Hi everyone, Can I please get some feedback my story? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/672960/being-a-hero/ I'm new in this writing business and I can't estimate at all if it is readable, as I'm not a native speaker I would be very gratefull if you could check it out and give me some...
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