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    Robot names

    I like micro and biology, but I'd prefer each name to work as a name by itself. For example, "Dick" and "Tracie". Yes, I know that's terrible but it does illustrate the point. I need two names which work alone and together have a quite different meaning. -Kidd "Max" and "Well" almost works...
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    Writing Prompt Write a story in 6 words

    At least it can't get worse.
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    Robot names

    Hi, I've also posted this on Discord, so apologies if you've seen it there. I have two robots in my story. They are exactly alike. They roll around and do stuff. One robot is "seen" by the reader in the story early on. The second is not "seen" until the second half of the book. So I want their...
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    metaphor practice

    The lie was out of the water and he couldn't toss it back in. Should "of" be in there?
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    metaphor practice

    Nah, more original please. Try again.
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    metaphor practice

    That's a little harsh on the Chinese. Great but not original. Offenheimer I believe. Nope, not a metaphor. Okay, use a metaphor to describe the state of your kitchen, your closet, your love life, or almond joy ice cream. Yeah, I know almond joy ice cream is heaven only sweeter. I think you...
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    metaphor practice

    Hit me with a great metaphor.
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    What are you looking for in a story?

    Hi, Tell me why you are on Scribble Hub. What is it that you are looking for in story? --Kidd
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    Debate me!

    I think peanut butter should be banned from desserts. No peanut butter cookies, definitely no peanut butter in ice cream, and why would anyone ever put peanut better in pie? NO! I SAY NO! NO PEANUT BUTTER IN DESSERTS!
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    Debate me!

    I think you should read my book.
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    Feedback: New Synopsis

    I've collected the feed back and changed the synopsis. Here it is. (BTW also got some hugely useful feedback from RR. Thanks, people.) My banner hasn't changed, but the new synopsis is too long to fit on the banner. I'll need to work on a shortened version. New Synopsis: Some say there was a...
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    Feedback: New Synopsis

    Some say there was time long ago when the dragons were wise and good, when they lived in peace with humanity. And Magic flowed among the people like a river at flood. Magical people were born into every family: healers, wind-whisperers, movers . . . The dragons, also magical, were scholars and...
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    I will review your first chapter

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/588059/hunted/
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    Title Recommendations, please!

    Dawn First Light The First Dawn Eden's Light
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