First of all, do space sharks exist to eat the people you expel from the island, or do they just drop into an endless void and vanish? And secondly, since sheep are apparently not considered sentient life in this setting, can't you just take someone's soul and put it into the sheep? It seems...
3 stars. You should switch to calling her a small woman (or whatever else you want to call a loli) after you identify her, the disgust bit could be better (the with disgust I covered my lips part), the thought is odd, considering that she should be in front of the person or near them, and...