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    What do I need to know to write a good cultivation novel with Taoist elements?

    What does having a healthy body even means for you and your character? Just being slim or just having no sickness? I would like to give it more deep if it's going to be a main part of your novel/character growth and add Mental health and even Soul/spirit too. Many novels show how having a...
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    Creating a Devil Fruit

    For the sake of character development, I would rather use a simple fruit at first like: Gain a random permanent 'buff' after wining a battle and a temporary one during battle after X time based on the number and strength of the enemy or something like that. Could also be applied to training and...
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    Creating a Devil Fruit

    Sounds more like Combo Star from 7ds with that name.
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    (for readers) good fanfics

    I think it's name is Grand foreigner found it on WN. If you like overlord and/or FATE it's great, it's quite long and takes its time to explain thing properly and the characters are truly well portrayed on their own way. I recommend it.
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    Is he right or wrong?

    So basically brainwashing the entire fan base of the idol? Sounds like a reall bad hero complex novel where the MC end up making things worse in the long run when you think about it.
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    Opposite of Divine

    If you go by name there is dozen but I just narrow down to: Worship gods got 1.000 points of 'Top Tier' OP energy and the 'Dieties' got 100.000 of low tier energy or 10.000 of mid tier energy technically getting the same amount of power.
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    I have a question about elements in fiction

    Isn't flying the same as air?
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    Just curious. Stereotypes/Archetypes of directional regions and four gods (holy beasts)?

    Elemental/season related dragons? Fairies and spirits could also work, I remember someone using seasonal Gods/Goddess too so it could depend on your setting to make one of your own like some demon continent at the north(?) and a holy/angel at the south(?)
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    dumb question

    Write the things you want in between the two [] spoiler things. You have a preview option that let you see how a published chapter looks like for cases like this.
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    Zombies based on blood type

    Depending of the difficulty that you want and if you want a Boss kind of zombie: The hoarder or mastermind kind of zombie could work too for the rarer one, like some kind of zombie that attracts other zombies or commands them depending of the threat you want in the zombies.
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    Zombies based on blood type

    Because there is nothing else about the story itself? It doesn't say that there wouldn't be mutated humans too and I was going towards that part. The more common would be making them focus on one stat: the muscle ones, speed ones, durable ones etc... but it would be too boring? Again, there is...
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    Zombies based on blood type

    I mean... this type of thing is usually done to create a connection with the reader so idk, make the most common blood type into something OP or unique? Flexible? So your reader will identify and dream of having said power because they also have that type of blood? I don't know if anyone cares...
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    What do you consider a strong character to be?

    It usually means personal strength meaning that he is stronger that those around him at equal grounds? Usually with age as a reference. The stronger the harder it is to take them down. Cunning or intelligence could mean using tricks and exploits to reduce that difference like the typical...
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    How does invisibility works

    I guess the 'logical' reason would be something like flash surrounding his body in this special speed energy? So when food enter his body it starts getting affected by his invisible energy?
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    Expanding upon my monsters

    I feel that there is a really big jump from tier 2 to tier 3 but maybe that's because I assume that the cities have some kind of magic/protection that they can use againts them.
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