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    When should we explain Xianxia cultivation levels in Xianxia novels

    In-between, treat it like a new level unlock in a game, something shiny and new appears
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    Toilet thoughts: How do you "characterize"

    I avoid describing the person, traits etc and focus more on their impact to help flesh all that out. Approach Describe their bedroom? Describe how they make others feel? If they died who would be at their funeral? Why would they ask someone for money? ... You can also take a celebrity or...
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    Choose your OP weapon

    There wasn't specification on how it returns, you could run and throw the brick, like a heat-seeking missile it would return
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    Choose your OP weapon

    Brick, tie it to a stick
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    VAMPIRE AUCTIONS

    lame werewolves
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    Thank You! Thank You! It feels good to be in Scribblehub

    Thank You! Thank You! It feels good to be in Scribblehub
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    Improve this advert

    Woman: Dear Tea, I don't have time to even breath today. Sorry but I would have to skip you. Tea: Who are you? How did you get into my teahouse? If you don't leave now, Ill call the T-Leafs
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    Writing Prompt How many of X was there?

    Location; Art gallery Two strangers meet Infront of a Art piece that's under hot contention due to the amount of money the museum paid for it. Stranger one argues that the Big red X painted on the canvas is marking an equation about life and space. Stranger two argues that it's just red...
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    Writing How to create an evil CHARACTER

    Traditionally the evil character is the opposite of the MC or a MC gone wrong. Make a main character as normal but have something that shift his views different from the hero. Example Hero likes mayanoise become his parents made it from scratch when he was younger. Evil hates parents and...
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    A guy who eats monsters - choose your MC! xD

    I'd say Chef that cooks monsters, from my perspective it allows for more routes like he has to journey south to find herbs that compliment a particular dish or he storms a mine with dwarfs to get mine-salt
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    Writing Prompt write a conditional super power

    Dungeon Gate world Upon the removal of 8 artifacts which bring good fortune to the holder from 8 separate gates, you become the Doomsday gate, having all the powers of the monsters that were in the gate whilst being the beacon that shines the way forward for the eldritch being heading to earth
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    How to make your character feel more human?

    This is one I've picked up from watching studio Ghibli but I imagine the characters bed room. Example : The character has block colored sheets on the bed, they look unwashed, strong smell upon closer inspection. Or Bookshelf with books stacked upright, colours in rbg order, no dust, hard wood...
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    Too much Ideas?

    I have a folder named plots; be it short or long all my ideas live there in outline form, random conversations etc. I would recommend having an idea of how your current story will end, be the arc ending or the whole story ending. That way you can keep the ideas within it contained.
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    Improving my writing skills!

    I'm on the side of quantity is not quality but familiarity. I agree with above that you do need to write more but when it's about improving stuff, write more with purpose. Write small, write just say 10 random chapters which only focus on the improvement of one specific aspect of your writing...
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    Mobile - Sidebar location

    Issue On mobile, The hamburger icon is on the right hand side but the sidebar opens up from the left hand-side. Suggestion Sidebar should be opening from right hand side.
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