I really am trying. I really want to get this right but it is just hard for me and I know I have a very long way to go. However, I need to get better because my stories require it. Thank you so much for all the time and responses you are giving me.
Yeah, I understand. Thank you. I really do not write Smut exactly. However, most of my stories incorporate some level of Smut for either internal-narrative or meta-narrative purposes. I have no experience writing full-on sex scenes though so I am trying to practice them and get feedback so I can...
Thank you so much for your feedback. I will take all this into my thoughts as a write a final draft of the chapter.
It is within guidelines, all the characters are above the standard age of consent. I use shota as an aesthetical term in the context of this chapter.
Honestly I felt the Pico series needed a 4th episode to bring the story full-circle but I found coco to be an interesting character. However, in the end the Pico serious is not as good as Super Lovers. It is atleast slightly better than Papa To Kiss in the Dark though. Anyways thank you for your...