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He should not have kidnapped Gohan.

LOL nice. 😂

They are over 18. I am using the term shota asthetically here.

LOL

Dec 25th, it's a good date or Feb 3rd. I really like both of those. Perhaps Marco Pollo in a Shark Tank full of harmless but realistic robot sharks.

I really am trying. I really want to get this right but it is just hard for me and I know I have a very long way to go. However, I need to get better because my stories require it. Thank you so much for all the time and responses you are giving me.

Yeah, I understand. Thank you. I really do not write Smut exactly. However, most of my stories incorporate some level of Smut for either internal-narrative or meta-narrative purposes. I have no experience writing full-on sex scenes though so I am trying to practice them and get feedback so I can...

Thank you so much. I just updated the chapter with much of the feedback I have been receiving so I hope it is at least somewhat better now.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I will take all this into my thoughts as a write a final draft of the chapter. It is within guidelines, all the characters are above the standard age of consent. I use shota as an aesthetical term in the context of this chapter.

Thank you so much for your feedback. It means a lot to me.

Not really making any recs. More just sharing my impressions LOL.

Honestly I felt the Pico series needed a 4th episode to bring the story full-circle but I found coco to be an interesting character. However, in the end the Pico serious is not as good as Super Lovers. It is atleast slightly better than Papa To Kiss in the Dark though. Anyways thank you for your...

Kk, thank you. Very good suggestion.

Sorry but I did not ask if I should write it so that response is not useful. Thank you for your time though.

No it just means below standard age of consent or atleast that is how it is used tag wise most of the time.

Yeah not really the best word LOL. Project would be more accurate.

are you legit suggesting I depict the use of condoms in the scene or are you making a joke response? I am just asking to be sure.

so are you interested in the job or no?

I have never written a sex scene before until now ( much less a Yaoi Shotacon Threesome ) and I desperately need feedback on the scene so I can improve and get better. Would any of you please be willing to read the chapter and then tell me what you think? It would mean the world to me. The...

Cool cool. Please contact me on discord at lexshira#5207.