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    which side?

    which side?
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    Soft VS Hard Magic systems: (The Lounge Podcast)

    is this podcast on soundcloud? also discord link doesn't work
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 9/10 Straight up tells me what's about to happen, I like it. I never worked call centers before but I worked F&B, so .... I do think the title could be changed a little more to explictly hook readers in. Try a longer jap novel Cover: 7/10 It's good A.I. , but it's not striking enough...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Therein lies the biggest trap for the author. Imagine you as a consumer, looking for new books to get lost in, and i tell you that 'don't worry, *insert show* gets better at season 8' Immediately your mind will consider for a moment, however brief: "Is it worth slogging through seven seasons...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 7/10 Pretty good title, but a bit too vague? I don't know if it's a fantasy or mythical epic novel etc. Cover: 5/10 If you drew it yourself, that's awesome. I can't draw that well myself. But I'm sure you can make an equivalent cover in A.I with better font and typography to make it...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 7/10 Gives a bit of a horror vibe, I like it. If it's not horror, then i guess the vibe the title gives is completely off. Cover: 6/10 Are we absolutely sure this is not horror? This looks like a zombie novel cover. Blurb: 10/10 I like the dialogue start, sets up very good tension...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 7/10 Pretty good title, a good hint of progression already from the get-go. Could be a bit more obvious about what's going to happen, rather than just a generic progression of sorts. Feels like a blank slate novel if that makes sense. Cover: 5/10 I think you just changed it, but this...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 4/10 A bit too vague, I think if u seriously want this published the title has to scream out fast. Cover: 7/10 That's a nice cover overall, but i think more could be done to make it look a lot more professional. I'm not an expert myself, but worth looking up a few of the erotica...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 7/10 Intriguing, gives epic fantasy vibes. Can't say that it is the main hallmark of stories on SH, but looks alright. Cover: 5/10 I like it personally, and it would make for a very good traditionally published book. Unfortunately, you're in a webfiction world, so the cover is pretty...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Title: 7/10 The title is intriguing enough that I am immediately hooked into finding out more. It reads like a manga title of sorts, so it's a good hook. I only gave it a lower star because of how it doesn't match the cover nor the synopsis. Cover: 3/10 I like stained glass...
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    Has anyone else had this problem with Royal Road?

    You're talking about RR here, whose owner has once upon a time unilaterally removed all discrete rankings from the author dashboard (May https://www.royalroad.com/blog/55/feature-update-and-roll-back) (except #100-1) and shadowbanned sexual content fiction (June) without any discussion with...
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    Has anyone else had this problem with Royal Road?

    if SH had more algorithmic lists on front page, like genre specific trending, it could definitely give RR a run for its money.
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