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@ElliePorter is a brat. There! I admitted it!

If you are going for a cover for a book or kindle then 3rd is good but if publishing web series chapter by chapter than I think 4th will...

I think your writing is good, but I saw two problems in my opinion which you can easily edit. First your word choice may need some work...

This would go a long way to solving problems. As you transition him through the stages of his wake-up/recovery - I think there is less...

But I'm not doing that... :blob_teary:

Thanks for the Feedback @SurfAngel_1031 :blob_salute: . Yeah as @So_Indecisive said here, I actually took the line about the Eternal...

Is it comedy? Please tell me it's comedy! C'mon, who doesn't want to read about a dragon trying to find the love of his life on...

Hi there! I saw the thread and decided to take a look at your story and see what exactly was going on. With that in mind I looked over...

That part about the dao that can be named is part of Laozi's 'Ren Xing Dao'. It's a religious book for Taoists which was originally a...

Want to Know the Biggest Secret in the Fiction Writing Industry? It's not the Plotting they use, the Characters, the Theme, the...

I personally don't think there's anything wrong with a long or detailed synopsis. What makes yours difficult in specific is the language...

I'm going to be snarky and say... I don't like English and I don't like America. One is kinda overused...? and the other one, I can't...

First, Thanks for your feedback. So, I have information overload in my synopsis. I think I over-shared my world-building instead of...

I read the synopsis and maybe the first half of the first chapter! I tried to at least skim the rest. I can tell you put a lot of effort...

Thanks for using your time on this. :blob_salute:I just changed my synopsis, so if you find it lacking or interesting then please tell me