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If you are going for a cover for a book or kindle then 3rd is good but if publishing web series chapter by chapter than I think 4th will better serve.

I think your writing is good, but I saw two problems in my opinion which you can easily edit. First your word choice may need some work to make your writing flow better. Like here, we get it, she is beautiful, perfect and in golden armor, fighting with bruises. There is no need to use 'doll'...

Thanks for the Feedback @SurfAngel_1031 :blob_salute: . Yeah as @So_Indecisive said here, I actually took the line about the Eternal Dao, and Eternal name from it. It's a Chinese poem translated to English, so I can understand why its confusing. I wrote that part as a sort of Prologue inside...

First, Thanks for your feedback. So, I have information overload in my synopsis. I think I over-shared my world-building instead of the character. I already wrote about multiple factions when I should have only details about the main character, his starting situation and the overall goal. Just...

Thanks for using your time on this. :blob_salute:I just changed my synopsis, so if you find it lacking or interesting then please tell me

Yeah, I take back my words. A little bit, at least about the present tense. I'm more comfortable with the past tense. So I guess I will see where I can change the tenses. Got some past tense in inner monologue, which I converted to present, so there is that. I will start from simple marks to...

So, I need a synopsis that adds content to my tags but does not repeat it. Should have given a general gist of what to expect in first line and then used character dialog or motivation to make it more hook-worthy. I just read the first chapters of both of your series to understand what you are...

Hey everyone! :blob_paint: Just crossed 50K:blob_happy:, and I need your help to tell me what I did wrong. 🧐🧐 Anything from the first chapter, the latest chapter. Even the first paragraph. Just choose one and point out what you don't like or what breaks your immersion. The Good, the Bad, and...

Hi, What do you think about my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/953364/the-young-master-is-the-last-villain/ Aim: Characters. Are they good? Do you like them, Should I add more character dialog style or quirks? And Is the Cliffhanger Working?

Here's to a year of making great memories and fun times. Happy Birthday! 🎉:blob_party:

Passive Voice The active voice focuses on the sentence's Subject, who is taking direct action. SUBJECT. Good for Fiction Writing The passive voice shifts the focal point to the recipient of the action. OBJECT. Good for Formal Writing How to Identify Active and Passive Voice? Active Voice: In...

Woke up 20 mintues after alarm. :blob_shade: Then wasted the next 20. :blob_upset: :blob_facepalm: Completed 3000 words and scheduled my next 2 chapters :blob_paint::blob_paint::blob_party:

Here’s to a year of new possibilities, happy birthday! 🌈🎂🥳🎉

Blast off to another year of adventure, happy birthday! 🚀🎉

Happy Birthday! May your candles be as bright as Chin Chin's realm is dark! 🕯️✨😄 🎉 🥳