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  1. NyuuVioleRin

    Looking for a feedback :)

    Thank you very much for your feedback, your input is very welcome. As you said it seems I need to put more thought into this :) Fixed the jumping point of view* thank you once again.
  2. NyuuVioleRin

    Looking for a feedback :)

    Hey new “Author” on the site looking for constructive criticism/feedback on my story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/31530/maho-shoujo-system/
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