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Can you review mine books pls? Like is here-https://www.scribblehub.com/series/612268/wrath-of-reality/' Can you pls tell me should I change my writing style?

Can anyone review my book and tell me should I change my writing style? " https://www.scribblehub.com/series/612268/wrath-of-reality/ "