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    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Hey! I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my novel? Thank you in advance! :) https://www.scribblehub.com/read/729348-the-vampiric-lover/chapter/729350/
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    I'm looking for feedback on my new chapter! Thank you all in advance!

    https://www.scribblehub.com/read/729348-the-vampiric-lover/chapter/890052/ Thank you all in advance, please tell me what you think and what I need to improve on :)
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    Thank you! But you don't have to congratulate me, I've been putting my mental health in the back...

    Thank you! But you don't have to congratulate me, I've been putting my mental health in the back corner for sometime.
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    I know how you feel, I was in the same boat. I promise everything will get better, life...

    I know how you feel, I was in the same boat. I promise everything will get better, life definitely has some hard times. But that's our character development it makes us better and stronger than before. You just gotta have faith that it'll work out! We're all here for you!
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    t fees good to be back, and finally got around to editing my novel more and fixing things! My...

    t fees good to be back, and finally got around to editing my novel more and fixing things! My doctor put me on a depression and anxiety medicine and i feel so much better!
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    Free feedback thread.

    I'm sorry that the novel is a let down, I try to write after work. I promise that I will take what you said to heart and try to re-write them. Again, I apologize.
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    Feedback for Divine Puppets

    I checked out your first chapter! I have to say it's interesting, but for me atleast it feels short, instead of having it in little shorts, have the first chapter be longer to introduce things. Also, in the beginning I assumed that it would start out explaining the area around them, like what...
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    I apologize to everyone for my absence, I had some serious personal issues. But I'm back and...

    I apologize to everyone for my absence, I had some serious personal issues. But I'm back and hopefully better than before.
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    Free feedback thread.

    Can you possibly check mine out, please :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/729348/the-vampiric-lover/
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    Come check out my new chapter!

    Thank you :blobrofl:
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    The heat wave has been killer, if it wasn't for my constant pale complexion, I think I'd be...

    The heat wave has been killer, if it wasn't for my constant pale complexion, I think I'd be burnt. Nobody wants that.
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    Come check out my new chapter!

    Hey everyone! I apologize for being off for so long. I had some serious personal problems. ( A death in the family) I really needed some time apart from writing and recently started writing again. I hope you guys and gals can check it out and tell me what you think. Please tell me everything...
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    I have to say, everyone here is super nice and accepting. Thank you all for accepting me here...

    I have to say, everyone here is super nice and accepting. Thank you all for accepting me here and not running me off! :devilish:
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    Goodnight everyone and thanks for all the fish!

    Goodnight everyone and thanks for all the fish!
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    What would you do when you woke up one day inside the body of your main character

    Just you wait any second now Envy is gonna come in and defend me. Either that or she'll look at me like Red does to Eric and say "Dumbass" :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
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