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    If it's bad...

    If it's bad, then no one beside you will read it. If it's good, then people will read the story. If it is excellent, a fandom will be formed, and people will ask for more. Everything else is coping and sugarcoating. Just because something is bad, doesn't mean you can't enjoy or love it. But...
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    How often should I publish new chapter?

    I aim to publish three chapters per week. In my opinion, it is very important not to burn out and to maintain a certain schedule for the sake of discipline. However. I am by far the worst writer on the site, so heed my advice with caution. It is the quality of your work that matters, not the...
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    If you could have one question answered in detail, what would it be?

    When exactly do you use "the" in the English language? For example, you have the Soul Reaver, the sword of Kain from Legacy of Kain. The Soul Reaver is a name of this weapon. However! If we talk about Silence, a scythe of Mortarion from WH40K, we don't need to put "the" before Silence. Then we...
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    Requesting feedback: Can you please tell me why my story is bad?

    Sorry for taking too long to answer. Firstly, it's because all my other works are of poor quality. No matter if I always try to finish my stories, if the number of readers is low, it means that my writing is bad. It is an objective fact, but I struggle to put a finger on why it is bad. To me...
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    Requesting feedback: Can you please tell me why my story is bad?

    Sorry to bother you, but I have finished the prologue and can gather that this story of mine won't be very interesting to other people. Nevertheless, I will finish it for the sake of discipline, if nothing else. But I also want to learn from my mistakes and learn how to create something good for...
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    The Hive(Free Feedback Thread)

    If this is okay, I would like some feedback about my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1042505/hordedoom/
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    FREE REVIEW! Just subimit it, and I'll review it.

    Thank you for your kind offer. This is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1042505/hordedoom/
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    If it is okay, I would like an opinion about my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1042505/hordedoom/
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    One last chapter left to write, hooray!

    Phew, after 91 chapters and 352,080 total words so far, I almost have my first amateurishly edited work complete. I had a blast writing it, learned so many new things, understood where I made blatant mistakes in pacing, and (hopefully) gained a proper work ethic. It was fun! But I hate editing...
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    Blunt Feedback

    Thank you for your offer. If it is okay, here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/ .
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    The Hive(Free Feedback Thread)

    Thank you! The title should be fixed and the cover is added. Will do, and I am not a good writer; my prose and story as of yet are at their lowest, and my grammar could use help. I have no idea how to shorten what is already being written (I try to go one chapter one event or scene), but this...
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    The Hive(Free Feedback Thread)

    Thank you for your kind offer! If this is okay, here is my story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Good day. If it is okay, please check my story and tell me your honest thoughts about why it is bad: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/
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    I'm bored.

    Then Ravages of Time, Kodoku Experiment, or Cannon God Exaxxion (there is a lot of fanservice in this one; bad damn it, it explores the propaganda, gaslighting, and how both sides can be shitty perfectly).
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