Recent content by Rudexvirus

I appreciate the time you took! I will make sure to look at your story ASAP. I made notes about them working out the mystery/needing danger, and I was tinkering with more at the end as well to show some more action. Good to know what direction I need to take it.

I am finishing up this story, and was wondering if anyone else would be kind enough to provide feedback. I am making changes before I call it polished and would love the eyes. I am willing to read/review/rate in return. :)

haha oohh, it will get there. Just keep writing, we will see which story gets to the top!

I don't know that it would suit the story enough to change the cover out for it, but I am in love with it and wanted to share :D

If you are still taking requests I would love one! Name/Username: rudexvirus Name of your story: Visiting an Old One Link to the scribblehub page: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/27365/visiting-an-old-one/ Preferred image(s): (please provide a link to the image, don't display it) I don't...

As a side note, I love the cover for your library story! Can I ask where you got it?

Yeah, I am feeling that as well. It is hard to write a solid blurb when I don't really know whats coming. I guess the key may be to revisit it whenever a big shift happens?

I actually sat down and made some adjustments and posted the new info on the fiction page. If anyone is still willing to have a look the thoughts are welcome. The story isn't 100 percent planned out so some of the details are vague/undecided, but i'm hoping the new one works better and is more...

I apparently didnt have the notifications turned on for the thread...:( At any rate, those are excellent questions and issues. A lot of them are answered in the first chapter I believe, but I see that the assumptions made about the story could differ quite a bit from what's delivered. It...

Heya all, I was curious if there was anyone who was confident in their description/synopsis abilities that would be willing to help. I have two stories, one that just hit update number 13. My description of the story is standing at the first blurb I came up with when the story first started...

Wow, thank you for the time you spent here, I really appreciate it. I don't tend to think about adding a lot of background to the top of my stories. I really wanted to throw the reader into the action and get the story started. I will go to the drawing board and perhaps I can come up with...

At a glance I agree about the paragraphs. Short paragraphs and line breaks are great, especially when using online formats for writing/reading. They help break up the text and can really add tension and help with pacing, as well as add importance to special lines and sentences. But if all...

Thank you for your thoughts!! I have gone through and fixed all of the Italics ** issue I could find, so hopefully, those look better. I will need to have a proper read through for tricky sentences like that, I am sure one or two more are written awkwardly. On the issue of descriptions, I...

Ahhh, you know- that is a big oversight kn my part. I hate to admit that I didnt notice, but it was originally written for markdown that would have turned the astricks into italics. 😳 I will go through and try to fix those. Thank you!

Hey guys :D My story has been coming out for a bit over a week now, with a part released each day. I was wondering if anyone would be up for maybe trading feedback/reviews. I have plenty of room to improve, and the story has a while before it comes to the conclusion. The eyes would be...