Recent content by Torii

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    Where would you take this idea?

    Hm, what do you find annoying about it? Do you find the characters annoying? Is the logic of the interaction not to your taste (as with the blushing)?
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    Where would you take this idea?

    I wrote a chapter of something a few months back and don't remember what I wanted to do with it. Where would my fellow SH users take this idea? The title says it all...
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    Need help with tension and interest!

    Like the title says! I like writing isekai fantasies because I enjoyed reading them. However -- I feel clueless about what creates reader interest and tension in my stuff. I'm not sure where people feel tension. I'm not sure what people feel interested in. I do try to apply things I've picked...
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