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  1. Villam

    A new member needs feedback

    Very good advice! Thank you, sir. I will post more chapters from the start. Edit: I have posted Chapters 3 and 4. :s_smile:
  2. Villam

    A new member needs feedback

    I agree with you about that. :D
  3. Villam

    A new member needs feedback

    But I have explained in the description on the front page that I will update every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. But, yes, I understand what you mean. This will be a consideration for me in the future. Thank you.
  4. Villam

    A new member needs feedback

    Hi, thank you very much for your feedback. So what I want to do in this story is actually to provide a foreshadowing at the beginning of the story, an important event that will later happen in the middle of the story, then the story will rewind to a few months before when everything started. I...
  5. Villam

    A new member needs feedback

    Hi, everyone. I'm a new member here and need feedback on my story. The story title is Northmen Saga, and here's the little blurb: "I can judge friend or foe. I know which one is a big wolf, which one is a small dog, and which one is a small dog who only pretends to be a big wolf. You, big...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hi, this is my story and needs feedback. Thanks. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/357189-northmen-saga/chapter/357192/
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