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"His hands looked sore from the obscene amount of muscle in his fingers, calluses riddled his palm as he slowly curled his hand into a fist causing multiple cracks from the force of his fingers alone." I hope that helps

I have an idea of my own if anyone is willing to give advice. The story is a mid western + magic mix where magic is almost undeveloped and the only way the can harness it as a weapon is to infuse it into material causing a new mid west where gunslingers have much more creativity in their ammo...

That sounds like a real funny comedy , I would love to read it

Maybe I was doing a lot of quoting

Seems like an interesting concept but it would really need to be fleshed out as so far the idea doesn't have the meat of the world he was reincarnated to other than the fact or both evil and good gods that can interact loosely with the world which would make very interesting dynamics but...

Truthfully I do not read much Isekai but the mc not being from modern times is very refreshing but truthfully when I was reading this summary Satan came out of nowhere and left hooked my train of thought but the relations between the mc's company and the nations of the world would be very...

This is an common but underused idea but in order for it to be done correctly the demon lord must have a GOOD reason, this could be him taking over the world due to him having a poor upbringing and wanting to live in luxury to him being a combination of all the evil sins done by humans in the...

The story seems interesting but truthfully without a concrete idea of the ultimate project it is hard to give idea's because it could range all the way from a hyper intelligent mc slowly taking over the world or an mc who doesn't even know their was an experiment to begin with but has psychic...

The sounds like a great idea but the story can vary widely based on the protagonist (ie if they are a poor middle class or an aristocrat) but I would recommend that you make a solid foundation on what leveling up actually does. Does it make them smarter , stronger , faster or even all three? Or...

For this thread I want authors to be able to post ideas that they haven't turned into books yet (or are just beginning) and talk to other writers about improvements or general questions about the plot. I will try my best to respond to a majority of posts in this discussion and give advice as...

If you don't mind here is my book https://www.scribblehub.com/series/569252/life-in-prodosia/ If possible try reading past the first fight scene and tell me what you think, and btw just because I'm a new writer doesn't mean I can't take some critiques.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/569252/life-in-prodosia/ if you don't mind giving me a review, I would appreciate it. I'm a new writer but don't hold your punches

For this post I both want to shamelessly plug my book but I also want other small authors sharing their books with a little summary. Here is mine In a world of superpowers a large island city is created called "Prodosia" and with multiple povs of both reliable and unreliable narrators you will...

Sure , this is my first book I'm uploading and would love some advice and critiques Link is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/569252/life-in-prodosia/ it has multiple points of views showing the ins and outs of the city of "Prodosia" in a world where superpowers are frequent. With some...