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  1. SoggySpaghetti

    Newb author in search of some beatings.

    Thanks a lot:blob_evil_two: Writing in English when you don't even speak it most of the time is really stressful.
  2. SoggySpaghetti

    Newb author in search of some beatings.

    Thanks a lot for the feedback. Appreciate it. The sensor thingy was done as part of the comedy, but yeah I realize it gets annoying. Will try to fix things when I'm not busy being a lazy ass.:sweating_profusely:
  3. SoggySpaghetti

    Newb author in search of some beatings.

    So i published my first novel - Soul Caller, two weeks ago, and finally got it to over 10k words. Figures now would be a good time to get someone to nitpick every pixel so I can improve. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, but there are a few specific points I want to focus on: - Grammar...
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