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    Negative Feedback Thread

    Rip at it 👍✨ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Closed until further notice.

    Hi, I reworked the synopsis a bit. I wonder if this is a bit better. Synopsis: To the pawn lead on a trail of blood, mystery was an unfair game. Being placed in the body of a supposed murderer, moments after the act, is not a typical situation. And to prove one's innocence after the fact isn't...
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Closed until further notice.

    Thank you for the feedback! I really do need to work on the synopsis so I’ll see what I can do!
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Closed until further notice.

    Mind giving mine some feedback? I'm not the best at selling my story with the synopsis to be honest. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
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    Free Feedback Thread [Closed - Currently Reading!]

    Hi! Thanks for hosting! I'd like some feedback and criticisms as well, I can definitely benefit from both! You can read up to chapter 4 if you feel like it! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I offer mine as tribute https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
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    Missing Nin of SH

    Para the untouchable has appeared! ✨ *cue dramatic smoke bomb* (Your imagination is top notch fr)
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    🐲 Hoard of the Prince 🐉

    What's the horde? Is it food? Can I eat it :blob_cookie:
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    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Thanks! I appreciate the feedback! I went for a mystery type setup before I got to the world building so I’m glad you felt the panic and confusion in a good way! I’ll definitely take your advice on writing more very soon, like I’ll start immediately. Also, the story is more fantasy than I let on...
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    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Heya! Imma drop mine here, read if you want to! Much appreciated! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/
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    Feedback thread from me.

    Care to take a look at this? (If you’ve got the time) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hey! Thanks for hosting! I'd appreciate some feedback if you have the time, thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Howdy and hello (again lol) I wrote a new novel, and was wondering if you can give some feedback. You can post on thread, thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/
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    Drew this like last week then turned it into a cover cuz I’m lazy👍✨

    Hehe nice! I'll be giving it a read! Sounds charismatic already *wiggles eyebrows* (its a bad joke I'm sorry lol)
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    Drew this like last week then turned it into a cover cuz I’m lazy👍✨

    All good novels feed on previous novels! 🤌✨ hehe, also your novel must be great! Can I ask what it's called?
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    Thank you very much for the monkey and poops 🙏💕

    Thank you very much for the monkey and poops 🙏💕
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    I'm sorry if I made a bad first impression on you all (╯﹏╰)

    I'm sorry if I made a bad first impression on you all (╯﹏╰)
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    Yeah I really should have walked away from it earlier than I did, but I think I was too confused...

    Yeah I really should have walked away from it earlier than I did, but I think I was too confused by how aggressive they were being. I didn't know how to react properly I think
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    Drew this like last week then turned it into a cover cuz I’m lazy👍✨

    Thank you so much!! ʕ·̀ω·́ʔ✨💕 I've been working on drawing hands and clothes better so I'm happy it's good! My old novel was scrapped and turned into the new one! It's just how my creative flow works lol
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