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Backlog no, no.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/751491/in-his-will/ Would like to hear mine as well doktah.

Good luck

Shove

I'm sorry number 2, but I'll cast my vote for 1. :sweating_profusely:

Am I willing to take a full-on shotgun blast? YES

Not really a fan.

You owe no one with your reviews. Take your time.

I get better readers in RR than in SH. For some unknown reason, I get lower scores or feedback in SH. In terms of forums though, SH is just better, everyone in RR is just this sweaty person wanting to make a breakthrough with their story for money. There are no banters or friendly chats, all are...

Fear & Hunger. It's a game though but I was so amazed by it during my first play-through.

Ummmmmmm... can I just get my normal medical surgery? Without extras, please?

With the heroes. To me, it sounds more fun as we get to see it from the perspective of a party member from what I would guess is a summoned hero archetype.

Oh, I like that tad bit of Cora, makes her more human, and believable. By the way, It's fine to do this kind of massive info-dumps once you already established your world to your readers. For the first chapters, you are still on the shaping up the world kind of stuff if you know what I mean...

This assessment is only from your first chapter as I haven't read the others yet. I know you're here asking for feedback and criticism but let me first say that I like the family dynamic and your style of writing. I'm impressed. For my feedback, slow down and take some time when introducing...

At least it looked cute... Nope, nope, nope, not falling for it. It must be burned... still, it looked cute.

I have more things to burn than to choose from... Especially that ominous puppet.

Read it, liked it, and reread it after 5 years. Liked it even more