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  1. A-Thousand-ideas

    Your favorite line from your current work?

    "Hundreds of years since i have been home. hundreds of years since i seen the castles dome. hundreds of years since i sat on my throne." "Yet today is not the day, In time of peace they do not need a warlord, in times of peace they shall not have blood." I said to myself as I lifted myself of...
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    Free feedback thread.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/803310/new-world-same-wars/ Here you go.
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    Post your characters, and I'll tell you what I think of them from my reader's perspective.

    Hello SailusGebels i'm back again. Can you read the new series i made called New World, Same Wars. I've tried to edit and improve my grammar on it. i know its better than my last one. Be blunt on reviewing it. thank you!. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/803310/new-world-same-wars/
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    Sorry i haven't responded to you guys. been busy with many things. and a couple months ago i...

    Sorry i haven't responded to you guys. been busy with many things. and a couple months ago i decided to redo or start a new story with the same goals i had in mind. I started writing again in early november. ill be posting my chapter in one of your review feeds.
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    Free feedback thread.

    It's fine. Everything has pros and cons, just this story has a lot of cons which i was unaware of. edit: Before i continue writing, i'll be reading the sherlock holmes series to help improve myself
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    Free feedback thread.

    Sorry that it is bad i didn't prep for the story at all i just jumped in and started writing. i'm tired of being blocked by adhd on trying to make storys perfect. So i just pushed myself to write and ignore perfectionist side, too see if people would even try and read it and see if the story...
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    In a linear world where time flows linearly. Would a time controller be the most powerful ability?

    So you want a set and stone timeline, the only thing i can think of for a story for what you described is a sci fi/indiana jones type of thing edit: like discovering long lost secrets in the past
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    In a linear world where time flows linearly. Would a time controller be the most powerful ability?

    Well if he can change the way time flows then it would be powerful as he can make a endless small loop cut off from the original timeline. but every time it does a 360 another timeline will be made smashed making another world and time playing at the same time in the same existence together...
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    Controversial Summary Feedback [CLOSED]

    Title: A new Era marches Summary: The novel takes place in a very late renaissance era, on the brink of a world war (The story have not developed far enuf to know its on the brink of war.) Synopsis: A seventeen year old reincarnates as a third prince without any of the princes memory. A small...
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    Feedback request for my novel

    Hi. i've been looking for some feedback on my novel A new Era Marches, as this is my second attempt on making this novel as i did a creative writing approach to it than a thought out one. I Would like no sugar coating, hit me as hard as you can with the feedback as i will like to learn from my...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Can you review mine? I need a honest opinion on everything as this is my first novel so i trying to tune out mistakes and bad habits. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/801419/a-new-era-marches/ Edit: The first chapter was made to quickly so many details are left out.
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    Would anyone be interested in a story based on Hypixel's Bedwars?

    I think it would be awesome if done right. like instead of a game lets say its a giant endless competition managed by cruel beings, or each teams made at random for a whole village were the MC grey up with and have feelings with them just to be forced to fight against each other in a ranking...
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    Looking for work Editing

    still looking for work?
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