Feedback request for my novel

[A-Thousand-ideas]

Hi. i've been looking for some feedback on my novel A new Era Marches, as this is my second attempt on making this novel as i did a creative writing approach to it than a thought out one. I Would like no sugar coating, hit me as hard as you can with the feedback as i will like to learn from my mistakes.

A new Era Marches (Dropped)

At a turn of a Century, A war is looming near. With a new age begins, the past is forgotten. Forging paths with methods of ancient and new. Two hundred years of prosperity and peace comes to an end, as new empire rises and one falls. The world is marching...

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[melchi]

The first sentence in the synopsis says oops wrong image sorry. You should probably delete that because it will give a bad first impression.