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Not if you personalize those gods and make them your own The world is too diverse and someone will always be offended by something. I always try to be cautious which is why fantasy is great. This is your world. So your gods get to be whatever you decide as the creator. As long as it makes sense...

I do have a character with mental illness but i have never considered including a disability rep in my novels. Thanks for the insight

just passing through and not stopping

I want more villains to not get redeemed. More heros to lose I am tired of everything just working out in the end. Sometimes that lesson to not trust people in the future in the ending. Not this last-minute attempt to redeem a villain and explain their very weird actions to give us some sort...

I guess you are right, you just reminded me of wei wuxian, doing bad things but led but good motives and goals. Do check out my story, one of the main characters is an anti-hero which will be slowly revealed throughout the story.

Hello, I would appreciate a feedback on my novel too. Thank you Thysia – The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub

is there any other kind? lol I am a bit of the opposite, sometimes I have no boundaries. I let this character suffer and the whole arc turned into a series of unfortunate events but I think I like the character suffering so much that I changed parts of my story to match this new accidental...

If this is what you are looking for then maybe you can give my novel a chance The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub

I couldn't agree more What genres do you like?

The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub fantasy historical BL GL supernatural elemental cultivation I would love some comments and feedback on my first novel. Thank you

I am having the same issue too. Someone suggested i describe/show things more instead of just telling. But i also don't want to be too specific that i limit the imagination of the reader. It's a real struggle

I agree longer novels can have that effect

Congrats on the journey. I have only just started my first novel

My work is pretty much my imagination in terms of the plot. Which is why i like creating new worlds in most of my stories. I am also trying to be technically correct in my writing so i don't offend anyone due to not fully researched concepts. The characters are derived form different people...

Thank you so much for the review. I will be honest with you i have been thinking about this book for years. It's going to be a four books series. I wanted every character to be introduced in the first part and a bit of their history so you understand all the actions they are going to take moving...

Here's my story. I am definitely checking out yours. I am a new writer so any feedback is appreciated. The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub

Hello. I am a new writer and would appreciate some feedback on my novel. The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub Thank you

Please review mine too The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub Thank you

I am a new writer and i have started uploading my chapters. No one has ever read my work before so am in dire need of feedback. I am pretty much done with the first part of my book. I need feedback if the novel is decent enough or if i should do a complete rewrite. Any feedback good, bad or...

It took me a lot of courage to finally post something for someone other than myself to review, Please take a moment to give feedback on my novel. Thank you! The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub Thank you!