New Series Comment Request Thread

[MintiLime]

Are you a new author wishing someone would comment? No, you don’t want writing advice. Not critiques or help or anything. Just good old fashion comments on a story? Well this is a thread for you!

Drop your novel in the thread and I’ll take a gander and glance at it. I might not get around to read all of the chapters and it might take awhile, but I do my best to comment as a normal reader.

Please let this be an invitation to others to read through these novels as well.

Rules for Authors:
1. Include a direct link
2. Comment your genre
3. Note anything like strong language, sensitive topics, etc.

Rules for Readers:
1. Reply to the Authors post to let them know you found them on this thread
2. NO REVIEWS OR RATINGS
3. Comment on 30% of chapters you read

An example for other Authors and my own submission:

Divine Puppets

Selling your soul may be the price of magic in fairytales, but your free will is much more valuable to the deities of Maharnak. After all, what could be more useful than slaves following your every command? Some people choose to willingly walk this path as one of the Holy...

www.scribblehub.com

Fantasy, Adventure, Horror
The story features a transgender character that has body dysmorphia, a bigoted villain that has unholy thoughts, and a character that feels alienated from people and struggles with derealization. All chapters that have significant triggers have warnings on them, with the worst of the stuff being hidden in spoiler drop downs so they could be skipped. No strong language. Gore is fairytale like.

 

[LunaSoltaer]

This is actually a really surprisingly cool idea!

Sadly I don't have any new series... but I might actually be giving your book a read soon! :O

 

[MintiLime]

This is actually a really surprisingly cool idea!

Sadly I don't have any new series... but I might actually be giving your book a read soon! :O

If you have any older series you would like comments for feel free to drop a link as well!

And I’d be eternally grateful :)

 

[Jun_Sakazuki]

Are you a new author wishing someone would comment? No, you don’t want writing advice. Not critiques or help or anything. Just good old fashion comments on a story? Well this is a thread for you!

Drop your novel in the thread and I’ll take a gander and glance at it. I might not get around to read all of the chapters and it might take awhile, but I do my best to comment as a normal reader.

Please let this be an invitation to others to read through these novels as well.

Rules for Authors:
1. Include a direct link
2. Comment your genre
3. Note anything like strong language, sensitive topics, etc.

Rules for Readers:
1. Reply to the Authors post to let them know you found them on this thread
2. NO REVIEWS OR RATINGS
3. Comment on 30% of chapters you read

An example for other Authors and my own submission:

Divine Puppets

Selling your soul may be the price of magic in fairytales, but your free will is much more valuable to the deities of Maharnak. After all, what could be more useful than slaves following your every command? Some people choose to willingly walk this path as one of the Holy...

www.scribblehub.com

Fantasy, Adventure, Horror
The story features a transgender character that has body dysmorphia, a bigoted villain that has unholy thoughts, and a character that feels alienated from people and struggles with derealization. All chapters that have significant triggers have warnings on them, with the worst of the stuff being hidden in spoiler drop downs so they could be skipped. No strong language. Gore is fairytale like.

Thank you
I only got 3 comments Could you please share your thoughts and comments on my novel? Your feedback would be greatly appreciated
Genre: collection of short stories

Journeys Through Words

Embark on 'Journeys Through Words,' a captivating collection of oneshot stories that whisk you away to diverse worlds and experiences. Each tale is a doorway to exploration, where characters traverse uncharted paths, face life-altering choices, and uncover hidden truths. From the fantastical...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[MintiLime]

Thank you
I only got 3 comments Could you please share your thoughts and comments on my novel? Your feedback would be greatly appreciated
Genre: collection of short stories

Journeys Through Words

Embark on 'Journeys Through Words,' a captivating collection of oneshot stories that whisk you away to diverse worlds and experiences. Each tale is a doorway to exploration, where characters traverse uncharted paths, face life-altering choices, and uncover hidden truths. From the fantastical...

www.scribblehub.com

I’ll check it out between this week and next week!

 

[Seaspecter]

Anna’s Dream

This web novel is about Anna the only child of the enigmatic being known as The Dreamer. Join her as she travels a world filled with magic and wonders. She's not the chosen one, she has no destiny and there's no telling what she's going to do next, other than...

www.scribblehub.com

Oh this is fun I like comments!
Okay my story is high fantasy that leans towards dark fantasy if you pay attention to what's going on in the background.
There's strong language, gore, lots of sexual innuendo, and terrible jokes.

 

[MintiLime]

Anna’s Dream

This web novel is about Anna the only child of the enigmatic being known as The Dreamer. Join her as she travels a world filled with magic and wonders. She's not the chosen one, she has no destiny and there's no telling what she's going to do next, other than...

www.scribblehub.com

Oh this is fun I like comments!
Okay my story is high fantasy that leans towards dark fantasy if you pay attention to what's going on in the background.
There's strong language, gore, lots of sexual innuendo, and terrible jokes.

Adding to reading list!

 

[Paul_Tromba]

I would love some comments on any of the stories in my signature. Only one of them is new though.

 

[dummycake]

what do I comment? what I liked about the novel??


edit:sorry guys I don't know how to read and missed the first paragraph of the thread

 

[Thebluedoo]

Relics of time | Scribble Hub
Mainly adventure but some action, drama, and fantasy
No strong language, sensitive topics, mature/sexual content, and gore

 

[YuukeiRorogan]

Just adding mine here just in case. Yes, both of them are new.

The world’s destruction, my masterpiece

What do you think will happen if someone who's not in their right state of mind gets transported to a fantasy world with the power to make everything he imagines into reality? He's tasked by the god to destroy the world. Though, he doesn't fully grasp this mission, as everything...

www.scribblehub.com

This one is just some Isekai I decided to write with the goal of making the mc too op that any problems will be solved so fast. I mainly focus on fight scenes. It will be like opm where mc don't end things fast even though he can just one shot everything. Also, the whole story will only be MC's pov. No other pov or anything.

Beng Beng Pew Pew

The world has been 'Blessed' with a number of people that has the ability to summon a weapon. They are to fight demons that mysteriously appear anywhere from the underworld. Yuukei, who's a normal person all his life, suddenly has his life change when he met a talking snake...

www.scribblehub.com

Idk about this one. I'm kinda trying to write some shounen. I'm still testing how it will go.

 

[TUSOG]

The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub
fantasy historical BL GL supernatural elemental cultivation

I would love some comments and feedback on my first novel. Thank you

 

[icey6]

Cool Idea!

Here’s one of mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/816226/i-got-into-monster-high-but-im-human/

Genres: Fantasy, Romance, Comedy

 

[Paul_Sawyer]

I guess I'll try as well.
Tales of the Great Plains
Fantasy, Myth, Parallel World.
Content warnings: cruel animal abuse, violence, lots of foreign words (and I mean really a lot).

 

[dummycake]

It's not a series, it's an one-shot

The Princess Doesn’t Know How To Bully Me, So I Bullied Her [ONESHOT]

There's this classmate, a blonde girl, who is the Princess of our kingdom, and she tries to bully me every day. The problem is that she doesn't know how to; she's the most innocent little princess. Her bullying consists of childish spell pranks that kids learn when they're 8. So, I...

www.scribblehub.com

Tags: Girl's Love, Smut, Romance, School Life, Fantasy, Magic

It takes like 10 minutes to read, I'll be pretty happy if you comment or even review it.

 

[MintiLime]

Thank you
I only got 3 comments Could you please share your thoughts and comments on my novel? Your feedback would be greatly appreciated
Genre: collection of short stories

Journeys Through Words

Embark on 'Journeys Through Words,' a captivating collection of oneshot stories that whisk you away to diverse worlds and experiences. Each tale is a doorway to exploration, where characters traverse uncharted paths, face life-altering choices, and uncover hidden truths. From the fantastical...

www.scribblehub.com

checked out the first three chapters; it’s great so far!! I think I will check out three a week to comment on going forward

Anna’s Dream

This web novel is about Anna the only child of the enigmatic being known as The Dreamer. Join her as she travels a world filled with magic and wonders. She's not the chosen one, she has no destiny and there's no telling what she's going to do next, other than...

www.scribblehub.com

Oh this is fun I like comments!
Okay my story is high fantasy that leans towards dark fantasy if you pay attention to what's going on in the background.
There's strong language, gore, lots of sexual innuendo, and terrible jokes.

Checked out the first three chapters! I’m planning on checking out three a week going forward. Great so far!!

Cool Idea!

Here’s one of mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/816226/i-got-into-monster-high-but-im-human/

Genres: Fantasy, Romance, Comedy

My childhood aghhhhh! I’ll check it out right now
Read and commented, up to date!

It's not a series, it's an one-shot

The Princess Doesn’t Know How To Bully Me, So I Bullied Her [ONESHOT]

There's this classmate, a blonde girl, who is the Princess of our kingdom, and she tries to bully me every day. The problem is that she doesn't know how to; she's the most innocent little princess. Her bullying consists of childish spell pranks that kids learn when they're 8. So, I...

www.scribblehub.com

Tags: Girl's Love, Smut, Romance, School Life, Fantasy, Magic

It takes like 10 minutes to read, I'll be pretty happy if you comment or even review it.

Checking it out, will skip the R18 stuff
And commented!

I guess I'll try as well.
Tales of the Great Plains
Fantasy, Myth, Parallel World.
Content warnings: cruel animal abuse, violence, lots of foreign words (and I mean really a lot).

Not the cute creatures! Checking out now
Read the first four chapters, I’m in love! So good! It has this otherworldly mystical feeling that truly captures the old myths. Read the first four chapters and commented, will read three a week minimum going forward

The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub
fantasy historical BL GL supernatural elemental cultivation

I would love some comments and feedback on my first novel. Thank you

Since I’ve already read a bit of this from a feedback thread, I will start reading next week, three chapters a week! Keep your head up and keep writing, Author!

Just adding mine here just in case. Yes, both of them are new.

The world’s destruction, my masterpiece

What do you think will happen if someone who's not in their right state of mind gets transported to a fantasy world with the power to make everything he imagines into reality? He's tasked by the god to destroy the world. Though, he doesn't fully grasp this mission, as everything...

www.scribblehub.com

This one is just some Isekai I decided to write with the goal of making the mc too op that any problems will be solved so fast. I mainly focus on fight scenes. It will be like opm where mc don't end things fast even though he can just one shot everything. Also, the whole story will only be MC's pov. No other pov or anything.

Beng Beng Pew Pew

The world has been 'Blessed' with a number of people that has the ability to summon a weapon. They are to fight demons that mysteriously appear anywhere from the underworld. Yuukei, who's a normal person all his life, suddenly has his life change when he met a talking snake...

www.scribblehub.com

Idk about this one. I'm kinda trying to write some shounen. I'm still testing how it will go.

I’m almost through the list of novels! These two next!
Read four chapter of Bang bang pew pew, strangely addicting. I want to skin the toilet bowl snake
Read the first two chapters of the other one. Dream like sequences and true to description! I think I’ll focus on Bang Bang Pew Pew and then get to this one once I catch up :)

Relics of time | Scribble Hub
Mainly adventure but some action, drama, and fantasy
No strong language, sensitive topics, mature/sexual content, and gore

Now it’s your turn! Thank you for your patience :)

Relics of time | Scribble Hub
Mainly adventure but some action, drama, and fantasy
No strong language, sensitive topics, mature/sexual content, and gore

Read the first two chapters! I’ll be reading one to two a week! Definitely scratches the Indiana Jones, National Treasure itch!

 

[Raymann]

Me too.
I use naturalreaders to read. Cut copy and listen. Will follow and check out other's works too...

Here's mine. Just started.
Will upload every Sunday.
:-]
Genre :- time travel, villainess.

They laugh when Villainess dies

-They laugh when (the) villainess dies- After collapsing while engrossed in a reading binge, a teenage girl wakes up to find herself sharing the body of the villainess from a famous web novel. Determined to rewrite fate, our MC must navigate the treacherous path of avoiding conflict with an...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[MintiLime]

I would love some comments on any of the stories in my signature. Only one of them is new though.

I will be reading https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...ther-world-but-my-morals-contradict-my-title/ Already had it on my reading list but hadn’t started it yet!

Me too.
I use naturalreaders to read. Cut copy and listen. Will follow and check out other's works too...

Here's mine. Just started.
Will upload every Sunday.
:-]
Genre :- transmigration villainess.

They laugh when Villainess dies

-They laugh when (the) villainess dies- After collapsing while engrossed in a reading binge, a teenage girl wakes up to find herself sharing the body of the villainess from a famous web novel. Determined to rewrite fate, our MC must navigate the treacherous path of avoiding conflict with an...

www.scribblehub.com

Added to reading list and up to date! The OI reader within me is super excited!!!

 

[CrimsonGenius]

This has been around since December.

Power of the Elements: Recharge

Jake Ishida expected ordinary days when he moved to a new city. He did not expect the mysterious warrior, Pilot, to give him a strange crystal. The crystal transforms him into the Fire Radiant, a warrior of order. Now, he must learn how to utilize his new powers to fight...

www.scribblehub.com

Action, Adventure, Elemental Powers

Starts with a teenage boy getting a strange crystal from an alien to become the warrior of fire. Later on he is joined by others to fight threats on Earth. Later on they will travel to a different world where most of their adventures will be held.

 

[Paul_Sawyer]

Not the cute creatures! Checking out now
Read the first four chapters, I’m in love! So good! It has this otherworldly mystical feeling that truly captures the old myths. Read the first four chapters and commented, will read three a week minimum going forward

Thanks a lot! I'm very glad that you like it.