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Do whatever you want with mine, mate. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/841701/a-mercs-guide-to-mercing/

Thanks glad you liked mine, I'll keep your advice in mind.

Would love for you to read my book, do as you please with it.

Certified lover boy, nah, I'm a certified boy lover. That's it, that's my only contribution to this thread.

Pretty good overall, First Chapter (P.0) does a pretty good job at establishing the dark tone, and the world that your book takes place in. Some things feel just a tad over described, though that's just a personal taste of mine. Not personally a fan of dark fantasy books, but someone who's into...

Thanks for your review man, I'm glad you liked it. Also thanks for the advice about putting Urban Fantasy in the tags so that people don't get confused when the Mercs do wacky things, though I guess your review could serve as a warning of sorts, lol.

Lol, thank, I will keep this in mind. You've actually mimicked Cinema Sins back when Cinema Sins was good pretty well, lol.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/841701/a-mercs-guide-to-mercing/ It's about a bunch of Mercenaries doing random stuff for money. Review however much of it you want.

"Hey team, Ms... er... Mr. Vitra here I guess, uhh anyway I understand that the whole genderbending situation has us all a bit panicked--Snipe has torn apart half of the base trying to find a suitable hijab substitute," He muttered that last part, quite unhappy at one of the more sane Mercs not...

Read the first two chapters of the Dark Lord's Bride book, pretty good honestly. You do a good job at establishing Sachi's character, her life before becoming part of the book, and just how bad the book is itself. Might honestly read it more, it looks like a fun book so far.

Pretty good tbh, though my main issue is with the grammar. It's best to say "[Insert character here] said" after the character is done talking, at least for me it's way easier to read. Also, when a character is done talking, press enter to make a new line, it makes the story way easier to read...

Hell yeah brother.

I'm doing my own feedback thread now, mainly cause I wanna read and review more stuff around here. You don't gotta interact any of my stuff in return, but it would be appreciated if you did. I'll read the first few chapters of your book and tell you what I think of it. My qualifications: I can...

Yo, you still doing reviews? If so could you please do mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/841701/a-mercs-guide-to-mercing/

Ah nice, that honestly sounds like a pretty fun way to right.