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At least I am just one day late with the chapter...

This maybe futile, but I take the lead once more.

This is quite amazing, thank you! I feel for the artists, but it seems this generation of images has itself become ... something like an art? Since I still haven't got enough traction to commission hand drawn images, I hope you won't mind if I use them!

Ob la di, Ob la da, Life goes on, BRAHHH LALALA how their life goes on.

He's not the messiah, he's a very naughty boy.

Whilst thou speakest in Emoji, I employ some spear shaking language.

I throw my glove within this gauntlet.

You will read and read, but will little think What wealth my words to you will bring. For often, when on your couch you lie, In vacant or in pensive mood, the lines, the characters, the events, may flash upon your inward eye, which is the bliss of solitude. And then your heart with pleasure...

Oh chick of the interwebs, I leave my meager story for thy pickings. Pick what thy will. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/952326/the-conqueror-of-night/

I may only read one chapter, in the interest of time. Currently, I have a huge backlog. As I haven't read your story long enough, I would not be able to review it on the story page. On comments and posts here, I shall. But, otherwise, I feel it will be an unfair review.

I shall definitely go through it. I did glance through the first chapter, and so far, it's been a charming dialogue of two young boys, and rather bad teachers. Unfortunately, I'm swamped with year-end work. I will get back to it as soon as possible. But, you are in queue. So, it might be after...

If you want to discuss in a little more depth, you can DM me always!

Hello! I read till chapter 5 in your novel! That's awesome, but that's because your language is great. However, right as I started, I felt the texture of the language overshadowed what was being said. What I mean is that I found it to contain so-called "purple prose". It's difficult to power...

Right on! I'm doing yours right now. LMAO, didn't know there would be so much smut. But, I will give a review!

You're always free to read through mine. I wonder how and what I'm doing.

Hello! I dropped it in the first chapter. I couldn't understand what was going on - basically, there's too much description. The trick, I feel, is to ground your reader, letting them fill out the gaps. Unfortunately, the description kept going on a bit too long, and my attention wandered. I...

Word! A hundred gazillion agrees of mine agree with you, great Mesopotamian ruler.

So, first of all, I dropped the story after Chapter 2. I was not expecting to reach chapter two. I wasn't even looking to review smut (but, here we are). The beginning is excellent. There were sentences here and there that broke my flow, but I could power through them because I was curious just...

Hey, thanks for replying! Do mention if you want me to leave a review beneath your novel. So, I'm just gonna do it here on this thread. Right off, you start it as an epistolary so my interest was piqued. However, there were some inconsistencies of tense that put me off. I just couldn't get my...