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  1. Islorae

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Thank you very much! I will hop right on that and hope the Chick will grace me with another critique in the future!
  2. Islorae

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Thank you for the feedback. I admit I spent hours splitting them up and just now realized your solution would have been much easier. Now I feel silly lol. I greatly appreciate it.
  3. Islorae

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    I would greatly appreciate any insights or feedback on my story. I'm quite new to this, having begun only a week ago. There are moments when I'm really pleased with it, but at other times, not as much. Just last night I restructured the chapters from 6 to 15 after learning that 5k to 7k words...
  4. Islorae

    How do your decribe Cities/Kingdoms!

    To be honest, I am not Tolkien by any means. I prefer to give a generic description with one or two detailed elements (to make it unique and stand out) but then I like to let my reader fill in the blanks. I only do this because as an avid reader of traditional books myself I find the most...
  5. Islorae

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    I would greatly appreciate the feedback. I admit I just started to write with very little planning. In fact the chapters I was writing was 4 to 7k words each. I just recently broke them up after some feedback. Do you have any tips you discerned during your studies that you believe contributed to...
  6. Islorae

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I am pretty new to everything and still in the initial stages. Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Also any good novels of a similar Genre I am looking to learn from. (Currently going through top lists). Feyborne Chronicles | Scribble Hub I do not know how to put images in my...
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