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    Need help with constructive criticisms! XIANXIA / ADVENTURE

    Hello! Thank you so much for your input!! I really appreciate all the guidance in writing a better synopsis! I tried to incorporate your feedback into the latest draft below (as much as I possibly can.) My problem with vagueness is still about trying to strike a balance between introducing the...
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    Need help with constructive criticisms! XIANXIA / ADVENTURE

    Hello! I think you had an older version of the synopsis I wrote. This is the most current one (i'm sorry its so confusing because I kept trying to rewrite it with your comment in mind...) Being part of the karmic cycle of reincarnation, even deities have their past. At the end of their lives...
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    Need help with constructive criticisms! XIANXIA / ADVENTURE

    I have actually just redid up a new version of the synopsis. Could I trouble you for some feedback? Love to hear more about what you think of this new version Thanks!
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    Need help with constructive criticisms! XIANXIA / ADVENTURE

    Haha! thanks for your critique! i'm actually still in the midst of drafting up the entire plot summary hence the title and synopsis are all just working drafts. I'll take your comment to heart and work on a more accurate description of the synopsis and title. I do agree that everything is...
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    Need help with constructive criticisms! XIANXIA / ADVENTURE

    I had just recently started writing a xianxia novel. Would appreciate any comments and feedback at all! Thanks! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/56131/fate-of-a-thousand-lives--/
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