Poems cause:
My spear, pierce upon her flesh
Bestow upon her three seasons without rest
And for the rest of her life, let her worry
For the bills, food, and money!
Impregnate!
You're right i'm experimenting and it's true that i'm making things up as I write lol. I have the idea of how I want my world though.
I'm mimicking webnovel style cuz I found long paragraphs to be dizzying, but I don't know about the latest chapter—after I've read Ookami's lecture about...
Wow, I didn't know that there's a word for writing like that. Thanks for the info.
I don't think my poo will go out if I did that, it takes a lot of focus to release them.
Do you like them complex like a detective's pin board, or do you like them simple like your dog's brain?
I have a good memory and bachelor in arts of laziness, so most of the time I just think of the major points that I want on my story and then the ending that I wanted.
Just follow what the people above me said and you'll do good. SH readers are lenient to new works, I can attest that as someone who posted 19 chapters of work in webnovel and 40+ total chapters in Royalroad all with no single comment at all.
Ghosts. Imagine how terrified every ships they're going to meet when they saw the deck filled with clothes floating, sword slicing, cannon firing, yet they could not see any sign of people at all.
I'm sure that the ones making the decisions don't see your situation with their own eyes. People are cruel or rather indifferent to the darkness they don't see even if they knew it(like wars far from us), especially with their own benefits laid on the table.
Not is SH, but a Chinese webnovel it's a different take of card genre:
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/theres-absolutely-no-problem-with-the-magic-cards-i-made/