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Thank you! I plan on doing a lot of character background in chapter 3. I hope that's not too late? The main character is meant to be lacking in substance at this stage of the story. Like a blank canvas. The inciting incident in the next chapter will be what starts to grow, change and challenge...

Perfect! Thank you. I will keep working at it.

THERE I FIXED IT

Honestly I'm not that concerned about the reception. I'm more concerned about the ACTUAL WRITING! I shouldn't have included that in the post.

Rhythmic Love is a new fic that I started posting yesterday. I'm looking for critiques on the story. Are these first two chapters boring? Is the writing bad? I'm not too concerned about grammar issues because this has yet to be beta read and can be fixed at that point. I'm new to writing so any...